Those thoughts ,feelings,illussions,dreams,
Well i guess they were all dreams,
You've forgotten I'm also human and cant keep pretending it'sall good whereas its not,
Those doings,well i doubt i can forgive you,
I guess few will only understand,
how it feels to trust someone who betrayed,
deceived and rejected one,
I still doubt there's a place in my heart left for you because,
the part of me that loved you is ...........GONE.
Barakat Akannbi
The outstanding imagery in this poem is enhanced by your poetic choice of heavenly metaphors blended with the rhythm flowing from your heart. In other words what a nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours,it pictures it all and I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. Bravo!!
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